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DAVID LION - MASTER HYPNOSIS

Hello. PFA my entry for your contest. Look forward to your feedback and suggested changes. Thanks - Bhaskar

Participación en el concurso Nro.64 para                                                 Empowering Landing Page redesign, help people be best version of themselves
Participación Nro. 64

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  • kbhaskarsaxena
    kbhaskarsaxena
    • 5 años atrás

    Hello. Hope you are doing well today. Just wished to confirm if you have been able to receive the link for updated design. Thanks.

    • 5 años atrás
  • eggsperience
    Organizador del concurso
    • 5 años atrás

    I like the design. Can you put another call to action here? (button START NOW)

    • 5 años atrás
    1. kbhaskarsaxena
      kbhaskarsaxena
      • 5 años atrás

      Hello. I am ready with the updated version. Kindly follow this link to check. I wasn't able to send message via chat and the new job idea didn't work. So hopefully you could check and get back to me with feedback. Thanks. LINK : https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ILSETaaoZmv5Sryt77cWiFYQKYkanD7N/view?usp=sharing

      • 5 años atrás
    2. kbhaskarsaxena
      kbhaskarsaxena
      • 5 años atrás

      We could work on color scheme if you like the layout and content. We could add / remove sections or change images and style. Eagerly look forward to your response. Thanks

      • 5 años atrás
  • eggsperience
    Organizador del concurso
    • 5 años atrás

    Can you work on the text section? I think it is the font that may be too small, or not vivid / engaging enough. But you are on the right path friend

    • 5 años atrás
    1. kbhaskarsaxena
      kbhaskarsaxena
      • 5 años atrás

      Hello. Thank you for the kind feedback. 1) I shall add the call to action as requested. 2) Regarding the text section, the font is 21pt and when it would fit Screens, it would be big enough to be legible. However we could definitely work on making it engaging. So, are you looking for changes in the whole section of course details or just in the ' Learn my secrets : How to...' section? Also, to make it more engaging if I use some icons / illustrations? Hope you could respond. Thanks

      • 5 años atrás
    2. kbhaskarsaxena
      kbhaskarsaxena
      • 5 años atrás

      Hello. Are you available?

      • 5 años atrás
  • kbhaskarsaxena
    kbhaskarsaxena
    • 5 años atrás

    Kindly send me a message over chat if you wish to receive high-res version. Thanks

    • 5 años atrás

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