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illisia
Illisia's Alien Parody: Prologue
Hy! I have written this "prologue", with plans for a few scenes and the finale as well, but I wanted your feedback on what I have so far before writing anything further, if you can. I've shown it to a couple of people and it made them smile and/or laugh, so that's a good sign, I think. I've left this un-sealed, as I would love to hear other people's thoughts and this doesn't give away my "plot twist" (I have one of those! lol). I hope you like it, Contest Holder! :-) Please rate and comment; thanks!
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illisia
- 4 años atrás
I think I shall write another scene (or two, or three :-p ) today :-)
- 4 años atrás
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DepartmentS
- 4 años atrás
Great start, Illisia. I'm sure the CH will want to read more. M : )
- 4 años atrás
