Copywriting GMT

Dear Happymarli, it's Laurent we worked together for Behnemar yacht text one year ago. I need for a customer a copywriting, it's for a Corporate presentation. They are selling in Pakistan all the Europeans big brands, I joined you their portfolio. Can you re-write correctly and improve their text and also create text for their main categories of Products Watches Pen Etc etc all is in the PDF below the text they send me. Thank you Happymarli Laurent VIENNE The Mission Our mission is to diversify our business portfolio in Pakistan and retain our position as leaders in the Watch & Jewellery industry. The Vision Our vision is to become the Pakistan's ultimate place: To continuously provide impeccable service to our principal brands To find world-class and exquisitely designed watches and jewellery To create a unique shopping experience To achieve the highest level of customer service To empower our employees and recognize each employee’s contribution Trust and Honesty GMT & Co is determined to maintain and expand the excellent relationship that it enjoys with our principal brands. Our long term success is based on the reputation that the company has built over the past [login to view URL] and honesty has always been and will continue to be the foundation of all our business endeavors. From just one brand - to a vast portfolio of the best luxury Swiss watch brands, the company has attracted some of the biggest names in the watch industry. Today, we are proud to be the sole distributor of these amazing brands, most of which are synonymous with luxury. World Class Design With the vast portfolio of brands, it is easy to see why GMT & Co houses some of the most exclusive, innovative and unique watch pieces. Each brand is a masterpiece in its own right. With intricate designs, architecture and innovative complications, we cater to a vast array of clients. Whether you are a teenager looking for the latest “it” watch, or a high profile industry professional, we have designs and brands to suite every taste. These brands continuously evolve and each symbolizes the perfection of their craftsmen. At GMT & Co, we are proud to be associated with these truly global brands. Ps: You can amend through your copyrighter should you wish to improve this