wanna to work.......just want to say
At the very least, I would suggest getting a proofreader of some sort to go over your about page (and your entire website, while you’re at it). Even if you’re a freelance writer or editor, there’s a chance that a typo can sneak into what you’ve written and, if that’s the case, even a small error can make you look bad. You can go over your about page as many times as you like, but something can still slip through that a fresh pair of eyes will catch. If nothing else, bring in a proofreader.