Copywriting Review for Private Real Eastate Sale

I'm doing a website for the private sale of a property in a coastal area of Australia. It has about 500 words. I need someone preferably with some real estate experience but at least with some good sales copy writing experience to review my text. Normal practice would be to list with an agent and advertise on the big real estate sites like [login to view URL] or [login to view URL] Initially I'm planning to try something different. I want to laser focus my marketing to those that live in the Northern coastal part of Sydney - they have plenty of money & probably choose to live there because they like the coast. More specifically though I think an ideal buyer would be someone who is a nature lover or otherwise eco inclinded. The house is pretty rough & the property is remote so I really want to focus on the natural beauty aspect but I think I still need to mention all the usual info too. To some extent I want to filter out those that are not rugged enough to live there so we don't wast time with them. See text attached.